MESSAGE

 

I'm sending you a message

through the breeze of the night

It's like I'm talking to you

are you there to listen? 

The last words you said

that you couldn't care for me

you closed your curtains 

and then you left me  

If you heard I'm not happy

it's hard how I miss you

because I gave you everything

that you wanted from me

You were the sunshine 

whenever you smiled

and our days were warm

because colored of your charm

Now in my eyes circles of tears

clouds of regrets and fears

 

 

 

Comments

  1. That is a sad poem, yet it's lovely at the same time.
    Take care.

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  2. Muy bellas palabras. Muchas gracias por pasarte por mi blog y quedarte, yo también me quedo por el tuyo.

    Saludos desde Plegarias en la Noche.

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  3. I enjoyed reading your poem.

    All the best Jan

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    1. Thanks a lot for your visit.. Have a nice day

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  4. Hello, Hassan!

    What a lovely words! Congratulations for your feelings.

    L' Amour, toujours l' amour (love, always love).

    How is the wetaher in Fès? In Lisbon, it' s cold and rain.

    Bye, bye!

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    1. Thanks a lot CEU, weather here is cold at night
      but no rain..

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  5. An excellent poetic message.
    Have a nice weekend.
    Hugs.

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  6. A amargura é patente, mesmo que o Amor seja (ou tenha sido) uma marca.
    Bom Poema. Parabéns.


    Abraço
    SOL

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    1. Thanks a lot my friend sol..

      Have a nice weekend

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  7. Amores não correspondidos, sempre serão uma fonte inesgotável de inspiração, para o universo da poesia!...
    Mais um excelente poema por aqui! Gostei imenso!
    Um grande abraço!
    Ana

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